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2019高考北京作文题写作应中心明确 事例扎实
作者:高考吧 发布日期:2020-03-06 点击数:206

一、作文题目

从下面两个题目中任选一题,按要求作答。不少于700字。将题目抄在答题卡上。

①“韧性”是指物体柔软坚实、不易折断的性质。中华文明历经风雨,绵延至今,体现出“韧”的精神。回顾漫长的中国历史,每逢关键时刻,这种文明的韧性体现得尤其明显。中华民族的伟大复兴,更需要激发出这种文明的韧性。

请以“文明的韧性”为题,写一篇议论文。可以从中国的历史变迁、思想文化、语言文字、文学艺术、社会生活及中国人的品格等角度,谈谈你的思考。

要求:观点明确,论据充分,论证合理。

②色彩,指颜色;不同的色彩常被赋予不同的意义。2019年,我们隆重纪念五四运动100周年,欢庆共和国70华诞。作为在这个特殊年份参加高考的学生,你会赋予2019年哪一种色彩,来形象地表达你的感受和认识?

请以“2019的色彩”为题,写一篇记叙文。

要求:思想健康,内容充实,感情真挚,运用记叙、描写和抒情等多种表达方式。

二、整体评析

作文一:

北京新东方中小学全科教育高中语文金簰教师王东对今年高考作文题做出如下解析:

“文明的韧性”一题,符合当下的热点,切中语文课程继承和弘扬中华优秀传统文化、革命文化、社会主义先进文化的基本方向。考生可以从对中国传统文化的热爱与传承,对革命精神的继承和弘扬,对国家和时代的责任和担当,对人类命运共同体的认识和思考的高度,选择自己擅长的话题领域,写历史变迁、思想文化、语言文字、文学艺术、社会生活及中国人的品格都可以,但要抓住一个明确的中心展开,有扎实的事例论证自己的观点,避免过大过空。

题目中有明确的对“韧”的解释,柔软坚实,不易折断。考生无论从哪个角度切入,都需要在论述中把握这一精神内质,体现中华民族历经风雨,生生不息的民族精神。考生容易出现的问题,一是眼界不够宽阔,深度不够,只是简单堆砌概念,但没有写出深刻的理解,只是空喊口号不能满足这道题的要求。二是中心不够明确,考生想写的点很多,但这些点没有构成一条清晰的逻辑轴线,说明“韧性”是什么,在自己选择的话题领域中怎样体现中华民族的“韧性”。三是缺乏有效的事例支撑,或者事例过于零散,无法聚焦在中心论点上。考生不能“任性”地理解“韧性”,削足适履,强行套用。

考生要充分照顾阅卷者的舒适度,注意结构的安排、素材的合理使用和适当的语言设计。要在写作中体现出思考的深度、论述的厚度和情感的温度。

作文二:

北京新东方中小学全科教育一对一部高中语文金簰教师韩潞鹏对今年高考作文题做出如下解析:

本次高考记叙文作文题为“2019的色彩”。本题与时俱进,既考查了我们对2019年前半年五四运动100周年的了解,又考查了我们对于2019年后半年共和国70华诞的希冀,做到了文章合为时而著,歌诗合为事而作。同时色彩这个词又使文章变得含蓄而充满文学性,让我们把对于2019年抽象的感受用具体的色彩表现出来,实现由感受到视觉的转化。本题做到了社会性与文学性的结合,抽象化和具体化的结合,出题人可谓用心良苦。

我们眼中的色彩主要由两个方面组成,一方面是外界之色彩,另一方面是我心之色彩。外界之色彩是外界对我们的客观影响,我心之色彩是我们对于外界的主观感受。我们的内心会因为外部的世界而饱受鼓舞,外部的世界也会因为我们的内心而变的更加美好。同学们可以任选其一进行撰写,也可以从两个方面同时进行写作。



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